Broken Promise: A Thriller

Sturgess nodded.

 

“You help people. You probably work with your hands, doing surgery, shit like that. So when I see you next, and have to relieve you of one of your fingers, that’s kind of bad for society, you know? Like, imagine this. I chop your finger off; then I get in a car accident or something, and you’re the only doctor on call, but you can’t operate on me because your hand is fucked. That would be ironic, right?”

 

“It would,” Sturgess said.

 

“Well, then,” the man said, giving the doctor’s shoulder one more friendly pat, “you better pay up, because I’m one fucking lousy driver.”

 

He chuckled, turned, and walked away.

 

Sturgess got his door open and collapsed into the driver’s seat. The man was right. He needed to get his problem under control.

 

But first he had to pay off the rest of his debts. Otherwise he might not live long enough to get his act together.

 

 

 

 

 

SEVENTEEN

 

 

David

 

ONCE Detective Duckworth was done with me, I had to find a way home. I considered calling my father, but he’d already been pressed into service to pick Ethan up at school, and I didn’t want to have to answer all the questions he’d have if he picked me up at a crime scene. And Mom, according to the brief chat I’d had with her, had hurt her leg, so I wasn’t going to trouble her, either.

 

So I called a cab.

 

You don’t hail a taxi in Promise Falls the way you do in New York. Unlike in the big city, most people here have a car and use it to go everywhere, so cabbies aren’t wandering suburban streets looking for a fare. You call in, and they send one out to you. Once I’d phoned in, I waited on the corner where I said I would be.

 

And thought.

 

What a morning.

 

Mom just had to send me to Marla’s with chili.

 

Of course, even if she hadn’t, we’d have all been drawn into Marla’s problems eventually, because we were family. We’d have been concerned; we’d have offered support; we’d have followed developments with interest.

 

But we wouldn’t be involved. Not like this.

 

I felt I was involved in this as much as I wanted to be.

 

I’d promised Marla my support, but not a lot beyond that. I supposed I could start asking around on my own in the hopes of finding something that would hold up her version of events, but just how obliged was I to do that? And there seemed little doubt Agnes would be doing everything she could, starting with the hiring of Natalie Bondurant, to make sure Marla didn’t get charged with Rosemary Gaynor’s murder.

 

The cab showed up.

 

I was home ten minutes later. Mom was stretched out on the couch; Dad was in his recliner, not reading, not watching TV, just staring off into space. I felt like I’d wondered into an old-folks’-home lobby.

 

“Where’s Ethan?” I said.

 

“I didn’t hear you pull up,” Dad said, his voice low and weary. “Where’s your car?”

 

“What happened with Ethan?” I asked.

 

Mom said, “Is Marla okay? Did she give the baby back?”

 

“Something wrong with the car?” Dad asked.

 

I had to find a job. I had to move out of here. I raised both hands. “I’ll fill you in, in a minute. Right now, I’m asking about Ethan.”

 

“He’s up in his room,” Mom said.

 

“What happened?”

 

Dad spoke up. “He got into some fight with a kid. Don’t know much more than that, but Ethan says he didn’t start it, and that’s good enough for me. I didn’t get a chance to see the other kid, but I hope Ethan landed a couple of good ones on him. I got his name if you want it, and the father’s. In case you and me want to go over there and have a word with them.”

 

The hands went up again. “Thanks for that, but let me just talk to Ethan. Okay?”

 

Mom couldn’t help herself. “What about Marla?”

 

“In. A. Minute.”

 

I climbed the stairs, rapped lightly on Ethan’s door, but did not wait for an answer before I opened it.

 

He was facedown on his bed, on top of the covers, his head buried in his pillow. He rolled onto his side and said, “Where were you?”

 

“Excuse me?”

 

“Why did Poppa have to get me?”

 

“Because I was busy. And nice try, trying to make this an interrogation of me from the get-go, but I’m the one who’s got the questions. What happened?”

 

“Nothing.”

 

I pulled Ethan’s computer chair over next to the bed and sat down. “That’s not the way this is going to go. Who’d you get into a fight with?”

 

He mumbled something.

 

“Speak up.”

 

“Carl Worthington.”

 

“He’s in your class?”

 

Ethan nodded.

 

“How did the fight start?”

 

“He’s always picking on me.”

 

“How’d the fight start?”

 

“He . . . he took something from me at recess and I tried to get it back.”

 

“What’d he take?”

 

“Just something.”

 

“I’m not in the mood, Ethan. Spill it.”

 

“Poppa’s watch. I mean, one of his dad’s watches.”

 

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