I wrote this story back in my early writing days. The first release of this book was very raw, very rough, and I’ve spent a lot of time overhauling it. Thanks to my wonderful beta-readers, it was suggested that the book only be through Kai and Jessie’s POV. Originally, I had included Millie’s and Mason’s POV. I had thrown those into the first edition to make it clear from the very beginning that Kai and Jessie weren’t really related. I thought it might turn readers away if they didn’t know that right from the start. But the extra POVs made the book too repetitive, so ultimately I decided to remove them. Hopefully readers stick through the ick-factor and discover the truth about Kai and Jessie, because they really do have a wonderful love story, and I’m thrilled to finally be able to publish it!
For fans of the original draft, or for those of you who are curious about what was cut, I’ve included the extra POV scenes for you. Enjoy! And thank you for reading Kai and Jessie’s story.
Cut Scenes
(Cut scene #1. This scene takes place at the end of the second chapter, right after Millie tells Kai and Jessie they are cousins. It is told in Millie’s POV.)
Millie Harper had seen a lot of things in her long life, and she’d lived as full of a life as one person could be blessed to have. She’d found her true love at a young age, and they had filled their modest home with an exuberant, loving family. Millie had enjoyed every aspect of raising and caring for her children. Her beloved husband had provided her with the opportunity to stay home with their brood, teaching them, molding their young minds. She’d encouraged them all to seek out what they wanted in life, and to live to the fullest, just as she had.
As a result, she’d ended up losing them all. All nine of her beautiful children had left the nest to carve out lives of their own. Her youngest son had remained in Denver the longest, sticking close to her side, but eventually a prestigious career in D.C. had called him away from her too. His youngest child, Jessica Marie, was the only family member that remained in the state, and she looked after Millie, as if Millie were the grandchild.
Millie’s oldest son was Kai’s father. He’d traveled the farthest away from the pack, and Millie had done her best when she was younger to visit with him often. At first, she had enjoyed the visits with her son’s family on the tropical paradise they called home. She’d found room in her heart to welcome and love Kai’s mother, and when Kai was born, it had been a cause for celebration. He had been difficult for them to conceive, the only one of her children who’d had difficulty in that area. The rest of her kids had four or five children each. Her oldest daughter had even topped her number with ten.
But Kai had been a miracle for her son and his young wife, and the trio had made Hawaii a warm, loving home. Then things had soured, and the marriage had ended. Millie had stopped visiting not long afterwards but she’d remained as close to Kai as she could.
So, as Millie watched her favorite grandson finally be formally introduced to her favorite granddaughter, she couldn’t understand why they were having such an odd reaction. Kai’s beautiful, deeply tanned skin was paler than she’d ever seen it. His gorgeous tropical eyes were wide as he stared at Jessica, almost as if he were shocked. Jessica Marie was acting no less strange. Her mouth was wide open, and her deep brown eyes were struggling with what almost looked like disbelief. The two gaped at each other while Millie glanced between them and tried to figure out the problem. Maybe their original meeting hadn’t gone well. Maybe one of them hadn’t been nice to the other. Well, they would need to move past that, and quickly. They were family.
Just as Millie was about to disturb the odd silence, broken only by the hum of the machines in her room, Jessica started shaking her head. She took a step back from Millie. “No, no that’s not possible.” After she whispered that, Millie could have sworn that Kai flinched.
Millie bunched her brows as she watched the strange meeting. “Well, yes, I know you haven’t seen him much…or maybe ever, but he is your cousin.” Jessica’s hands flew to her mouth. Her eyes watered as she looked over at Millie, and then back at Kai. He lowered his head as Millie gently asked, “Are you all right, dear?”
Jessica shook her head and looked about to start sobbing, but Kai stood and placed a large hand on Millie’s bony shoulder. “We need to speak outside for a moment, Grandma.” He smiled, although it did nothing to ease the look of illness on his face. “We’ll be back in a minute, okay?”