Have You Seen Luis Velez?

It was the most useful phrase he had taught himself. “I don’t understand.”

Silence on the other side of the door. Raymond took a step closer and leaned his fingertips against the wood of it. He wasn’t sure if that was the end of this visit. If he should go. If anybody inside ever planned on saying another word to him.

He decided he would open his dictionary and quickly teach himself to say “I want to ask Luis a question.” He wondered why he hadn’t done so right from the start.

Before he could, the door opened again, startling him backward a couple of steps. Again he found himself peering through an opening just inches wide. The chain lock was still solidly in place.

The face he saw this time was different. A younger woman, maybe in her twenties. She wore her amazingly thick, dark hair piled up onto her head, and full makeup. She chewed gum with a snapping sound on every motion of her jaw.

“My grandmother wants to know why you’re asking about Luis,” she said.

“I’m looking for a Luis Velez who used to help an old woman I know. But then he disappeared. She’s worried about him. So I just want to ask him if he’s the one.”

“When did he disappear?”

“Maybe three weeks ago.”

“He’s not the one.”

The door slammed shut.

Raymond moved in again. Leaned on it with his fingertips as he had before.

“I’m sorry to bother you again,” he called, his face close to the edge of the door. As if his voice, his breath, could blow it open. “But do you mind if I ask him? Just to be sure? Just so I can cross him off my list?”

Just so I can see his face when I ask.

The door opened again, and again the younger woman’s face appeared behind the chain.

“This is getting old,” she said.

“I’m sorry. I’m really, really sorry to disturb you on a Sunday morning. Or any morning. Anytime, I mean. But it’ll only take a second. I just want to ask him if he knows this old woman.”

“He’s. Not. The. One.”

“But you can’t know that for a fact. Maybe he was helping her, and he didn’t tell you. Some people like to keep it a secret when they do stuff like that. They figure it means more that way.”

“I know for a fact,” she said, and started to swing the door closed.

Raymond almost raised a hand to stop it. But that would have been wrong. That would have been stepping over a line. It would almost have been forcing himself into their lives. Instead he tried to stop the door with his words.

“Wait. Please. Why won’t you just let me ask him?”

The door stopped moving.

“Because he’s not the one.”

“But how do you know?”

The door slammed shut. Raymond could hear a scraping sound on the other side, but he had no idea if she was locking or unlocking.

The door opened. Wide. No chain.

Raymond looked in and saw an older man sitting in a wheelchair, a blanket over his legs, smoking a cigarette. His hair was gray and thin, his eyes distant. He never looked up to see who was at the door. He didn’t seem to be the least bit curious as to what all the fuss was about. He never saw Raymond standing there, as far as Raymond could tell.

“This is Luis Velez,” the young woman said, clearly at the end of her patience with Raymond. “Nineteen years in that chair. Now do you get it?”

“Yeah,” Raymond said. “I get it. I’m sorry.”

She slammed the door hard.

“I’m really sorry,” he called, feeling something in his belly grow heavy. It was a sickening feeling, as though something metallic were forming in there. Sinking down under its own weight. “I’m sorry I upset you.”

No answer.

There seemed to be no method for repairing the situation. Raymond had no choice but to move on to the next address.

He crossed Luis Velez on Third Avenue off his list.



Raymond tried one more place, in a rough section of Brooklyn. He thought it might take away the bad taste left by the last encounter. But all he got for his trouble was another no answer.

He walked back down the stairs of the five-floor walk-up. Of course this Luis Velez had been on the fifth floor. It was clear that life had no intention of making this easy for Raymond.

As he descended to the lobby, he thought of his first two Luis Velez visits ever. The doors had opened and someone had been there, ready to talk to him. Actually willing to make some kind of connection, even after it was clear that they had no business with Raymond and could not help him.

Beginner’s luck, he now figured.

He had knocked on four doors just that morning. And only one Luis Velez had even been home.

He crossed the lobby and stepped out into the street.

There was at least one basement apartment to the building, Raymond saw as he walked by. A short flight of concrete stairs led down to a sort of recessed patio. On that patio was a sea of . . . well, everything. Mattresses. A kid’s big-wheeled plastic trike. Stacks of linoleum tiles. Old floor lamps. And a man, sifting through all of it. As though he’d lost something there. Or as though a careful sweep of the area could turn up something of value.

The man looked up and saw Raymond. “Hey!” he shouted.

Raymond stopped, his heart pounding. The man sounded . . . combative? Angry? Why is everyone angry this morning? he wondered. The whole world felt angry. The very air he breathed seemed to tremble with it.

“Yeah?” Raymond asked.

The man was small. Compact and lean. Fairly young. He wore his hair buzzed short. Nearly buzzed off entirely. He wore a soul patch—a little square of almost-beard—under his lower lip. He was heavily tattooed.

“Wha’chou doin’ in my neighborhood, boy? I know everybody who lives here, and I don’ know you.”

Raymond felt his blood go cold. He could actually feel the coolness of it as it circulated. He wanted to run. But first, he knew, he would ask. He didn’t think it was the best idea to ask. But he could feel that he was going to do it anyway.

“I was looking for Luis Velez,” he said.

“I’m Luis Velez,” the man said. His eyes narrowed. He moved closer. Came up the stairs to the street.