The Hunter's Prayer

It made him want to be home and done with this. He was heading home, but the fragmented longing he’d just experienced had been for something more distant, unreachable: the touch and smell of skin, warmth, a laugh, a breeze off the sea . . . memories too painful to dwell upon, a sense of home that had never really belonged to him.


He knocked on the compartment door and waited for Chris to open it.

‘I’ll stay out here in the corridor until we leave the station. Close the door again.’

Chris nodded but from behind him Lucas heard Ella say, ‘Did you speak to him?’

He looked over Chris’s shoulder. He thought she’d come close to guessing a couple of times, but there it was in her face; for all her intelligence, for all that had happened, she didn’t have a clue.

‘No, I didn’t. I’ll explain once we’re on the move.’ She looked baffled but Lucas nodded for Chris to close the door. He had to wait, because she’d react badly and he needed the noise of the train’s movement to drown out any sound of distress.

A couple of people squeezed past him in the narrow corridor and then the train started to ease along the platform, imperceptibly at first, the movement so smooth it looked like the neighboring train was moving. He waited till they were clear of the station, speed and racket building.

Maybe Chris had said something or maybe, given a few minutes to think about it, she’d begun to stack things up. Either way, as soon as he stepped inside she said, ‘What’s happened? Just tell me.’

‘Your family’s dead. The police answered the phone.’ She didn’t call out, didn’t cry. It was like he’d spoken in a language she hardly knew and she was still translating in her head. Yet the expression on her face was familiar to him; it was how people looked after being shot.

Lucas heard Chris whispering, ‘Shit, shit, shit,’ and turned for a moment to look at him. He was sitting on the edge of the seat with his face buried in his cupped hands.

‘All of them?’

He looked back at Ella and said, ‘Yes, all shot, probably the same time as they tried to get you last night.’

‘But why?’

‘Your dad must’ve fucked someone off in a big way. And he had enemies.’

Her face and thoughts finally fused, dissolving into each other, a sudden violent retching of tears and emotion and strangled words.

‘Ben didn’t have enemies.’ She could say no more, falling apart into sobs, and then Chris was holding her and she was clinging on to him. He was whispering words of comfort now and the more he said the tighter she held him.

Lucas stepped back outside and closed the door. At first he couldn’t hear anything from inside the compartment, the train noise covering for them as he’d hoped. As his ears adjusted, though, her distraught cries became clearly audible and he started to look around uneasily, feeling exposed.

Someone came walking along the corridor, an elderly woman, too fat to pass him. The most natural thing would have been for him to give way by stepping back into his compartment, but he didn’t want to open the door and let the distress contained there spill out.

Instead, he walked along a little way and ducked into an empty compartment to avoid making eye contact with the woman. He walked back then, and for the second time his ears tricked him into thinking she’d quietened. But it was still there, an incoherent wailing, growing louder, more intense.

And there was nothing he could do to help. He could keep Ella Hatto alive, he could kill for her, but he could offer no comfort, no compassion. He didn’t have those things within him, and it made his skin crawl to stand there in earshot of her distress because it exposed him for who he was. He was a man with a gun, nothing more, and he didn’t even want to be that.





Chapter Five


She puzzled over the skirt through the first fuzzy moments of wakefulness. She seemed to be wearing a long skirt, one she didn’t recognize. She was slouched awkwardly and she felt if she moved she’d be able to see it properly and she’d understand.

Chris was holding her, though, and the train was rocking gently and she didn’t want to move. And then from the corner of her eye she saw someone else in the compartment with them, and then recognition: Lucas.

She jumped up in the seat, startled, full of dread. Chris released her. Lucas looked up from the book he was reading, curious perhaps, no more than that. She was about to say she’d had the most dreadful dream but her conscious thoughts had caught up with her.

Her family was dead. Lucas had told her. Men like those who’d tried to kill her had gone to their home and killed her parents, killed Ben. The tears started to form again, her throat tightening, but she fought clear of it, focusing on the moment.